Reviews of A thorny path
A thorny path
Josefine_4852
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Author, please, please, please write more updates-- this story is TOO GOOD to go 10 days without an update! (Hopefully you're not sick or having any kind of emergency or crisis!) As long as you're able, please let us know what happens next. . . what happens at the Birthday Ball? Does the greedy king try to take Amelia from the Duke? How did Amelia save the Duke 9 years ago? And why doesn't she remember-- at least remember him? Your writing is SO INTRIGUING and VIVID... with DEPTH, EMOTION, MYSTERY and COLOR! And this story-- THIS story-- is FULL of HEROIC POTENTIAL, of course by Amelia, but also the terrifying, but secretly tender-hearted, Duke!... wherever your imagination leads! Please update soon! [img=update] [img=fp] [img=recommend] [img=fp] [img=update] [img=fp] [img=recommend] [img=fp] [img=update]
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Such vivid descriptions and expressive emotions...VERY WELL WRITTEN! Flow of the storyline is perfectly placed; suspense and mystery deepened as characters are more fully revealed as the story unfolds--keeping the each chapter gripping and masterfully captivating. My one and only disappointment is that there is only one new chapter updated per week. I could easily lose myself in this story reading 20-30 chapters at a time--every day! But then, excellent writing requires sufficient time for diligence and refinement, that makes the story so engaging and effortlessly readable.