Sebastian_mechalis
This is such a creative story. I really loved how I just could feel the effort you put in describing this world, the different characters and their interactions. Plus, the cultures! It was so beautiful how you used so many of them, making your story completely colorful and interesting. I'll definitely keep reading. Amazing job and good luck!
I'll be honest here, love and romance aren't my types, but this story playing fate and love brought me closer to this type. I like how the author is designing his characters and story well. Mc is like overpowered character from the start and this is what I love most. Overall this book author is playing well with romance
The first sentence on the synopsis made me aww the characters. It's cute! Also, a great start at the beginning of your story! I like the characters as well. Writing is okay, but just a little bit of putting the dot (.) and comma (,) at the right places. I think the author can fix that so it's fine with me. Overall it's all good. Keep up the good work author!
The plot alone drew me in.☺️ It really reminded me of that one comic where a girl was transported back to Ancient Egypt and had a romance of a lifetime under the guise of Nefertari. Regardless, this story which is based in Ancient Korea(Goryo(?) I assume) is also fascinating. I enjoyed reading about the character's initial meeting. Tbh, the first chapter felt a little lengthy to read but the visualization was on point.👏 On a side note, there were a few redundant words, or sentences that could be phrased differently. Eg: "drought without rain" is basically redundant because drought already holds the meaning that there had been no rain and the weather was very hot. Aside from that. This is a beautifully structured and intriguing story. A lovely addition to my library. 😉
I love how deep and rich this story is, it's very relatable, and feels totally real. Not boring and not fake either,it's so powerful what an imagination it couldn't be much better ❤❤ for the writer your so smart, have a beautiful mind absolutely sensational ❤ Really thank you for this amazing work ❤ A+ Work!