Reviews of A Senju Tale: Change of Fate (DROPPED)

You should post it on fanfic section.

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Was really good and had a ton of potential and would’ve ranked it 5/5 but the mc who is a reincarnated person, has a system, been training literally since birth but he loses to Fugaku in an obstacle course and loses to him in their fight lol makes no sense to me except if he’s a beta Mc so yeah I dropped it after that lol

Kawaki is not same age as minato and team..He is at least 5- 7 yrs older than them... In the story kawaki and minato are depicted for same age....before minato enroll academy ,kawaki already died in anime

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The writing quality is not bad but the timeline is just Fuckk all over the place. Nah I’m out. I did enjoy the first few chapters and hope is gonna be a good story; but I’m just disappointed it did not captivates me to keep reading. And the chunin exam arc is just boring and Suck dDickk compared to Boruto version of chunin exam and Boruto is an awfully written anime.

This is a intriguing story and it follows a clan that is not often thought about in naruto fanfics. The only thing i will say i wish was for lest dramatic time skips with no detail of what happened in that time. Other than that thia is a amazing story and i hope the author keep up the good work.

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I hope you reupload it because i enjoyed going back and reading it everyone once in a while. ..............................................

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Apakah penulis akan melanjutkan ceritanya? Saya menunggu! Terimakasih telah menulis cerita yang bagus. Akan lebih baik jika masing-masing anggota tim dipisahkan untuk melanjutkan misi selama perang. Minato akan bersinar seperti di canon jika dia ditempatkan di front Iwa. Nawaki di Suna, dan sepertinya gelar diplomat mungkin berguna selama dia disana. Fugaku dengan EMS akan cukup kuat untuk menangani Kiri, fakta bahwa mereka mengalami konflik internal akan membantu Fugaku.

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Half of the negative feedback I get on this work is so cringe. It is almost as if no one read the intro. It is there for a reason. Please open your eyes if you wanna be a critic lol

Annoying angel. Shit system (Cliche asf). Why do all naruto fan-fics have systems like OMG........................................................................FUUUUCCCCKKKKK

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Love the story so far it’s interesting and well written. I’m able to look past the minor timeline discrepancy’s as it keeps me engaged and doesn’t mean anything major to the plot so far. Also would love longer chapters

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Well truthfully this is already better than most Naturo fics in this site, the writing is superb and the story is quite interesting, if you ignore a couple of timeline inconsistencies and age differences then this story is simply great.