Reviews of A Privateer's Life for Me

Hello author! Your story has potential, I must say. However, i think it really needs a lot of work. For me the pace on your story is really fast, i can't seem to catch up. Like one second, Andrew's injured, then the next thing he's already in the hospital. You may also add dialogue to break down the pace of the story. Correct usage of punctuation is also needed.Character design needs work as well, like add more descriptive words? Idk. Reading other works in your genre may also help. But nonetheless, your story's interesting and unique. Not everyone can make a historical fiction so kudos for that. :D

Ive been looking for a story similar and it intrested me. I havent read that far but it is slightly Difficult to read because of grammar issues. overall its alright.

It's a very unique novel. It just lacks character interactions or dialogues and it's more on the thoughts of the characters. It will pique anyone's interest but it kinda gets boring as you read longer, so add more dialogues or something that would keep the readers' interest, until the end.

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