A New Life From God

It was a very good plot. I personally really liked it. I do wish there was some more character description but otherwise it was very fun and enjoyable to read.

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The writing is good, but I think in some parts it transitions to quickly, or something. The story is great, but something is missing, I don't really know what it is though. Character design is bad, meaning that there is little to no description of the characters. Like what does Orion look like?