JustS_RandomWriter
(As I'm making this there is only one chapter of the rewrite) I can't say much about the rewrite since it's only just started. But from what I've read from this author before I can say for a fact that you should give this fan fic a try. Though I say fan fic, a better description would be an original story with some characters from anime. From what I could tell from before the rewrite and from the rewrite so far, the world and most of the charecters seem to be original creations. From what I remember from before the rewrite, the grammer is great and the relationships don't feel forced in any way. I can't wait for more.