Xelioatre
Good writing, good world and good concepts. Well thought out, very deep. The story pace and concept may not suit every reader. The first few chapters are very heavy and mostly psychological, mental state and to do with the characters souls and memories. Thats deep - maybe it's not that easy to pick up and get through the first few chapters to the main storyline? I felt that way - but I'm not representative of the whole world :) Just my own feeling reading this novel.
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