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A Kingdom Begins

Lothran

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SpaceTimeSovereign
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In my opinion, this is one of the best kingdom building novels I've read so far. although it has less than 100 chapters it is still very captivating and we'll designed. Keep it up author

Death_Scythe
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After 50 chapters the story very well written. Kingdom building and world building are truly portray in this novel and i love the fact that MC chooses a different race, not human it is interesting about the evolutions and the natives are aware of the system. Lots of potential to this novel as the world is really big with different races there can be different events and plots that can be use. Last but not the least, he is moving to the path of being the king and i like that.

KingOfHeaven
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Harem cuz I dont like harem?

NikTitanik866
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It's pretty good! A bit rough around the edges, but surprisingly enjoyable. The pace is a bit too fast though and the dialogue is written like a play, e.g. "Me: bla bla bla; Person x: Ble ble ble" etc. I would recommend it.

CITYGIRL
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baniel_stone
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I'm on chapter 94 and so far I quite enjoy the novel minus some slight grammar issues I just hope author doesn't focus on rapid production in advancing the civilizations and sacrifice good character development not saying the authors going to do that but it's become somewhat of a trend on this site

Abdul_Wadud_8137
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i recommended it. it very good. the mc is rational and good world development. although there were typos. but still can read it. Character introduction is good too. And the naming sense is good

Fabricio_8839
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Sinceramente me tiene enganchado,los personanes mejoran progresivamente y no estan rotos! No tengo quejas sobre la escritura. Supongo que se agrupara con las demas aldeas luego de la ola demoniaca. Que nos espera en el futuro? Imperio Kobolt?.Elmo sabe donde vives,no dejes de escribir buen hombre!

Puzzle1231
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DaoistwwYBDC
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.......................................................................................................................................................perfect

cilita2297
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Handole
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Taoist_Azure_Sword
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Im going to start reading this book and ill see if ifs a 5 star book or will ot lower. Im a big fan of MMORPG and i hope this novel is great!

illianna2
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