Copper_mask
Heelo! Author here. I am writing this book for the spirity Contest. I hope it will be to your taste. let's start with few salient features of this book- 1. Urban Fantasy guys... (I'm trying my hand at this genre) 2. lots of Magic ( including vampires, werewolves, mages, demons, gods, etc.,) 3.You need Badass Female characters, yes they will be delivered. 4. lots of side characters with their own story and ships to follow. 5.You want to dip to the Dark side, don't worry we will also go there. ( only occasionally you know, ) 6.Mystery and urban fantasy go hand in hand. 7.Mc is getting introduced to the magic world and so are you ( so no fear of getting lost ) ;-) just ride along Mc in this shaky novel to witness the action, thriller, mystery, and adventure. Yeah, there are love interests too. P.S-Happy reading guys, just enjoy your life......
Hopefully the author doesn’t delete my review. SPOILER The Mc was naive for a very long time.(100+ chapters)You can’t even give a proper excuse for that. He was almost killed more than the fingers on my hands, yet he still chose to trust people? He was told multiple times to not do so but he doesn’t listen. Then his friends try to kill him for the sake of their clans, and they think all is well? He’ll listen and forgive us? Like we didn’t try to kill him. The only question I have is “does he forgive them”. The plot was good at first but now it’s just not good. It was dragged out for way too long. Hopefully this novel gets a redo.
This is the first review I have ever written after being on this platform for 3 years or so and that just how much I like this novel. Right now there are only 50 chapter or so and the story is great. The strength system is diffrent from the traditional eastern cultivation and is more western. No op main character and you can see some character growth from weakling to maybe a future powerhouse? The concept is great and interesting and i'm just saying try to give the book a read and it would be worth you time
Well, it's good... Right now the chapters are very few, but so far it's really good... I really like the detailing though, it's really good So far, it's a good novel, so... yeah, it's a nice one and you should give it a shot. Right now, I won't say much about the character progression or more stuff as there are very few chaps so, cant make a false impression for you, new readers, but yeah... it looks really promising. I like it
Aside from a few clunky sentences herre and there, there's really not much to say about quality. uwu The first chapter is a delight to read, introducing the stakes and the worldbuilding in a very interesting way. And I love how the author was brave enough to write MC's daily life for two chaps before diving into the action. I feel that I see a lot of people just jumping into the action after a few introductory sentences. The introduction of a bunch of characters on ch 2 was a bit eh, but since each character took so little time to expose, it doesn't really bother too much. Aside from all that, excited to see where things go.
It was a consistently great novel until chapter 180 or so after the betrayal, where the mc totally lost his previous character, didn't get developed properly and everything turned into nonsense. This made me drop the novel after reading over 220 chapters since I couldn't follow what even was going on anymore.