Reviews of A Ghoul In Dc[Completed]
A Ghoul In Dc[Completed]
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Writing quality and stability of updates are 4 star.... This story has certain taste to it. tags: tragedy, betrayal, slice of life, gore, aggressive, r-18 chapters, male oc, transmigration If you enjoy the DC universe for it's light side, this story is not for you. This story questions authority figures and bias to an extent.
Everybody shiting this fanfic in reviews, before chapter 14(?I don't remember)I was the same, in the chapter comments(chapter 14 btw if you want to see) I was done with shiting author and dropped but with the author comment and next chapter was 5 minutes after so I came back to read and I didn't regret it.(author really incarnation of troll, so don't belive anything he said or did.)
(SPOILER WARNING) I really can't get past the first few chapters since every time he meets someone new he instantly get's away with something, for batman he stole 120k and said "It's for my mother who's suffering from cancer" and batman thought "Either way this is probably stolen," and did nothing about it. He met Raven after eating a human, and he said "I'm kind of like you" and she immediately joined him, He told catwoman that he needs to eat humans and she gets over it in 1 sentence, he gave her basically the lore of ghouls, telling her what he needs to eat and what he can't eat, mind you he's not even 12 at this point there's no reason for him to know everything when he just became a ghoul (He ate her food before but the one time hi didn't he suddenly became a ghoul and somehow figured out he could eat dead bodies and coffee) The interactions are so fast that the story is basically trash, there's no substance to the story and I honestly can't get into it. I read a review asking if this was harem and the author replied with what i believe to be a yes considering one was saying "nice" and the other said "why a harem, it ruins the story" I haven't seen any novels about ghouls(from tokyo ghoul) and I'm disappointed with how much of a wreck this is. Before I forget, author i don't care what your opinion on my review is, be it positive or negative.
It was good in the first arc but after that, it's trash I quit at chapter 38 just in case it got better but it didn't, In my opinion, you shouldn't have brought Tokyo ghoul in it should have just stayed Jasper. I also want raven and him together but then again this is only my opinion and you are the author so write what you like.
You know you should do something abosut his memories lol many people hate it but yeahh im okay with that, and u should do more dialogue (my opinion) and be careful when he have a dialogue with young justice member they're all is a youngster that still have a puberty so u should do the dialogue with more 'live' in it. You know what it means right? Teenager have a different personalities Beastbot with his noisy, raven with her ignorance, kid flash that alomost same with beast boy, just make sure do some research of dc character personalities before you write the dialogue. And least: im sorry for my bad english senpai
This plot is all over the place, side characters, particularly women are reduced to cardboard cutouts. Random edginess is inserted for no reason and the MC acts cringe. Characters like Raven and batman act in ways drastically uncharacteristic of themselves. This story honestly feels like it was written by someone on crack.
