A Fox's Journey

This is the first novel I've done and not sure on how good I do so I do hope that you could give me your honest opinion as I do need it to improve. thank you. Timmy, a young fresh looking man, wakes up to his normal life checking his phone for any updates on his novels finding there to be only one that he never got rid off due to lazyness slowly got up to do his daily routine and go to work but as soon as he did he saw cars, trucks and a plane all heading to him in unavoidable speeds and became no more... or is he? Timmy slowly wakes up to see... P.S. this is going to be a romance but not much and I am inexperienced so please do forgive my stupidity in some thing. Also continues in the first chapter so enjoy! ??