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The Story : It follows Roy's soul in the body of You Xiwang's life and how he strives to live the life in this surreal world while aiming for the top. Very interesting premise, the transmigration was explained from the start which made it clear to understand. The Style : The novel starts in first person, a comical start that could hook the audience. After the quick interaction between Roy and his system, the novel starts beiing narrated in a third person point of view. The author was able to convey the thoughts and perspectives of the characters wonderfully. The Grammar : Good quality compared to most of the original novels found in this site. Apart from some minor errors. It is very good.
Thank you author for thIs story. I like the step up upfront - both the Youâs siblings lost their parents and how he had then transition into this dimension that open a whole new perspective how the story evolve with the âsystemâ and the magic of his wrist band. The description of the realm and the level of elevation is clearly depicted. Looking forward to see the story climax and how Xiwangâs and his sisterâs character would evolved. As the head of the You family and the Council of elders roles are introduced - look foward to see how Xiwang will continue to defend his famIlyâs position in the power play. Keep up the the good work. Itâs a great compilation of charaters and how they will play off for those into martials arts. The story method is in depth with varying dimension used navigating readers back and forth in and out of the system realm - can be complicated but worth the wait to analyse the plot leaving readers anticipate more! Keep up the good work and effort author!