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A FAILURE'S HOPEFUL JOURNEY

THE_WORDSMITH

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daphneanmarcia
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Awesome story brother . That guy is a total Savage . the plot is good And interesting . The paragraph are clear and comfortable to read too.

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Wateristubeg
WateristubegLv3Wateristubeg

I've read the novel and I can say that the grammar really improves every chapter. You can really see the effort the Author puts in every chapter. I really love this story, Waiting for future updates:)

Wateristubeg
WateristubegLv3Wateristubeg

This book is fun to read 💯. First chapter and I’m already laughing out loud. This book is so good. I can’t wait to know the challenges Roy will face throughout this book. Can’t wait for future updates :)

Nicole_99
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KoCatt
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Justheguy
JustheguyLv2Justheguy

Well, the only problem about this is the grammar. If you fix it, it would be a masterpiece. Keep up the good work, and take some breaks if you have to. Writing can get sloppy with tired fingers.

Oemar_danoes
Oemar_danoesLv3Oemar_danoes

A failure's hopeful journey is one captivating isekai stylebook, although there's a twist which gains it even considerably. I'm just at the start of the book to make a very good review but it shows promise.

Aryna_Stan
Aryna_StanLv4Aryna_Stan

A failure's hopeful journey is one captivating isekai style book, although there's a twist which makes it even more better. I'm just at the start of the book to make a very good review but it shows promise.

sillymlk
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Dvanzy6
Dvanzy6Lv2Dvanzy6

I just read the initial chapters of this book and even the beginning was so good that I couldn’t stop laughing; it was absolutely hilarious. I loved the plot that follows Roy’s soul on the path of accepting failures. Great work author. Keep it up!!

Uae
UaeLv2Uae

I find it humorous. It was a detailed one that I could literally imagine everything. I also love the MC, but I especially love his soul. There's no dull moment in this novel. Also, the moral of the story was worth the reads.

MoeJam90
MoeJam90Lv11MoeJam90

Very nice premise! I love how the character struggles with his double identity! I can feel his emotions and I love how he interacts with the other characters too! Big Kudos to you Man!!! I will anticipate for future chapters!

Jyojiko
JyojikoLv11Jyojiko

The characters are quite fun and I enjoyed the little details on how you describe them. System is my favorite character, I love how sassy he is.

JustVandal
JustVandalLv10JustVandal

The Story : It follows Roy's soul in the body of You Xiwang's life and how he strives to live the life in this surreal world while aiming for the top. Very interesting premise, the transmigration was explained from the start which made it clear to understand. The Style : The novel starts in first person, a comical start that could hook the audience. After the quick interaction between Roy and his system, the novel starts beiing narrated in a third person point of view. The author was able to convey the thoughts and perspectives of the characters wonderfully. The Grammar : Good quality compared to most of the original novels found in this site. Apart from some minor errors. It is very good.

MyCatPaws
MyCatPawsLv3MyCatPaws

I wonder what adventure awaits the ML. The story was interesting on its own. You have a good description of how the story proceeds. Keep up author đŸ‘»

MikruZero
MikruZeroLv4MikruZero

You made me laugh easily in the first chapter. Basically your writing style is superb. Such foul mouthed creature is always the best(but if it is with me O think I can't handle it) Wish you continue updating author-san

mary_olajire
mary_olajireLv10mary_olajire

The story is much more amazing than the synopsis made it out to be. There are sentences in the first chapter that had me laughing out loud. Good job, author!

NorthStar
NorthStarLv12NorthStar

Thank you author for thIs story. I like the step up upfront - both the You’s siblings lost their parents and how he had then transition into this dimension that open a whole new perspective how the story evolve with the “system” and the magic of his wrist band. The description of the realm and the level of elevation is clearly depicted. Looking forward to see the story climax and how Xiwang’s and his sister’s character would evolved. As the head of the You family and the Council of elders roles are introduced - look foward to see how Xiwang will continue to defend his famIly’s position in the power play. Keep up the the good work. It’s a great compilation of charaters and how they will play off for those into martials arts. The story method is in depth with varying dimension used navigating readers back and forth in and out of the system realm - can be complicated but worth the wait to analyse the plot leaving readers anticipate more! Keep up the good work and effort author!

nixrsr
nixrsrLv2nixrsr

i really love this story! the sypnosis got me thrilled and excited! your style of writing is so good. each chapter is uniquely written that makes me scream for more chapters!

SJCTheLegacy
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This story is fun. I can see this story becoming more intense as the story progresses. Content wise it's incredible I'm hoping to read this in my spare time.