Hi Author!! I read the synopisis and the first two chapters. I already feel engrossed into the world created by you. The unique world comprising of different creatures is really a great thought😲😲... I also like the character "Madeline". I can feel her love for her father who works hard to care for her as a single parent.. I am looking forward to a great love story of the two leads and how they work together to save the world😊😊... Keep it up author.. Good luck👍🏻👍🏻
A very good world with lots of posibilites and interesting them combined with an simply yet effective premise that sure to make anyone want to read more. However the writing stile and lack of descirption, ponctuation and weirdly writen sentences make it hard to understand, but I belive that those issues can easily be corrected with a bit of editing. Would recomande :]
I got hooked to this one right from the beginning. By far one of the best fantasy novels I've read. The story has a fairytale vibe which I like a lot, but the MC here isn't a weak and lost girl. I like how she has this passion towards her talent. The king is intriguing, can't wait to read more to know how he falls in love with her. A thumbs up to the author 👍🏻😊