9 Review: Front Page (Synopsis)

The title and the abbreviation.

Path of the Demons - KOD

I wonder what KOD stands for. D is probably for Demon?

I never really understood what is the deal with having a title and a title abbreviation be completely different from one another.

P1:

- Starting the synopsis off with some needless shouting, I see.

P2:

- Run-on sentence much?

- Don't need the "Oh" at start of sentence. Unless this is an author's note.

- Smart man in college could be anywhere between the ages 12 and 99.

-- Mainly because child geniuses could enter college early in some countries.

-- But since it says "man," I will assume 16+ considering this is the age of consent in most countries.

- Drops out to find excitement in life: play a video game.

-- I've been there, done that, and got nowhere. Trust me, I don't recommend dropping out of college to find excitement in a video game.

- Is it exciting to follow a different path than others?

Rewrite of the synopsis in my own words: This novel is about a young man who plays a virtual reality game in order to find excitement in his dull life.

At least compared to the author's first novel which didn't even have a synopsis, this is an improvement. The first novel had two chapters and never continued updating since its last update in October 2018. I hope the author doesn't drop this novel too.