Reviews of A bored Gamer and his budding harem~! (Dropped)

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Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work- Keep up the good work-

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Ever heard of doing before thinking !!! ... you did !?? good then go read this then... ... anyway i would've given it 5 star for my personal loving of this novel ... but that's not the only thing... as we all know the stories the fanfic is made of has lots of bs in it so much so that it was overwhelming any contradiction there can be...but it was upped by the og author by done melon's to make melodies with which made the holes missed by the balls... anyway this novel will have a good appetite for those who love sweet but bitter fruit call understanding something from a different POV... anyway author did a fruiking job of meloning the melons and give a good outcome... And i believe it is more better than the OG... PS: This is my personal opinion/request- I love melons the more the better... in the case you don't get it... It's not just the melons that i love i love the whole thing along with allllll that's attached with it...😁😁 *good luck understanding that* so author buddy please give me allll the melons available with all the attachments... please... cz there's no reason not to... you don't deny free food as well and fev food NO MATTER WHAT... ahem* please do give it...

Hi azerial, I love all the stories you wrote until now and hope you keep writing for a long time, so I wanted to write these review as a show of my apreciation for your hard work and that you still make time to write even with the changes that are currently happening in you life due to the start university. Good luck and stay strong!

It WAS so good.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

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I am loving this fanfic. Just wish there were more chapters. Anyway keep up the amazing work Author-sama and don't drop.....................

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One of the better DXD fanfics with just enough fluff and characters development that doesn't seem forced. Some situations may seem weird to people but it's a new refreshing take an gamer type fanfics so continue the good work author.

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your novel is interesting and has potential but I'm temporarily stopping at chapter 4 my reason being you need to describe the family better I don't know who is who and who is talking you need to fix that before you get to far in this story you have no character descriptions you don't say who is talking and you don't say what is the relationship each person has to echo and if you do its so mixed up I cant tell who your talking about so please redo this a little or at least put an auxiliary chapter for character pictures and descriptions Writing Quality 5 stars Stability of Updates 5 stars Story Development 5 stars interesting so far Character Design 2 stars I don't know who is who or what they look like World Background 4 stars stopped at chap 4 The total score 4.2

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