Author's note

Well, this is my first time writing outside of a roleplay and even those have been rare lately. In all honesty I'm writing this for three main reasons.

1st: I'm planning to write another story and this is mostly practice as well as a way to vent if things get annoying since being a NEET isn't as fun as they make it out to be. I usually feel like crap for not working and helping around home with bills. So for anyone who sticks with me and can calmly tell me how to improve I will be the utmost grateful.

2nd: Troll characters are kinda funny so here is to seeing if my humor is acceptable to others. Not that I care if it is, but it helps if I can blend into conversations easier since between me and a friend, I have to be the social one at times and I hate talking to people I don't know face to face. It's awkward.

3rd: I just wanna have fun with this. And have fun with you guys having fun with this. So long as an idea is something I can do and others are for it, I'll try to incorporate story suggestions as much as possible while trying to keep the timeline relatively intact.

Now, in case anyone is wondering what a "Golden Ring" is; it's another term for reincarnation/transmigration cheats like a sword in your soul, a pendant with a separate space inside, a spiritual beast tied to you, etc. I know for some Grammar Nazis mine might not be the best despite being a native born English speaker from the states. And honestly I can't keep track of all the rules for different areas and sentences so quite a lot of my writing may be with fragments since I follow the rule that so long as you can understand what a person is trying to say, you shouldn't get too hard on their case. If anyone wants to take the place of an editor then I'd gladly welcome you ^^

As for Jin, his system is indeed Naruto based and I'll try to be as accurate as possible. I have the manga of Naruto and Naruto Shippuden complete but I haven't gotten to Boruto other than on Toonami. If a power from anime filler shows up then I'll try doing research before throwing it in. Also there is something I would love suggestions with which is the Mission System. Part of the Missions will be story based like

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"Help Blue Wind Nation"

[Mission Reward: 50,000 SP; x1 C-ranked Jutsu (Ninjutsu, Genjutsu, Taijutsu); +5 Random Element Affinity (Only applies to already possessed affinities)]

[Mission Failure: 25,000 SP deducted; Loss of x1 random item from host]

[Mission Details: Help the Blue Wind Empire retain their dignity during the upcoming gathering to stabilize the country. Options on how to proceed are left to the host.]

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I still have to work out how EXACTLY I want the Mission system displayed but you get the idea. I hope.

I forget, I should make it clear I want to avoid the Rinnegan as much as possible. Any situation where it could be an easy fix (i.e. Edo Tensei Jasmine's body, then return her to life with the Rinnegan). If it's stuff like that I feel while easy and exactly what we all would try to do if it didn't kill us, what's a story without a little struggle?

Last bit; I'm basically borrowing from- "In another World with a Naruto System", "The Strongest System", "Against the Gods", and several fan-fics that while good, had one or a few things that annoyed me. I'm sure I might annoy some of you and my apologies in advance. I'll try to get a stock up so that in case I actually do have a release schedule, if something happens that prevents me from posting then that I can make it up with extra chapters. Thank you for reading this and please look forward to "A Battle of Eyes Against the Gods"!

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