SacredDream
Writing Quality: High quality. No noticeable error that could affect the flow of the story. 5/5 Updating Stability: Can't complain much about this since there are tons of chapters released. And knowing the intense stress that comes with writing, I commend the author. 5/5 Story Development: The story is about the MC, Hayden, who was transmigrated into a different world of fantasy. Right from the prologue, the game progresses in a great way. No deviation from the plot. 5/5 Character Design: The characters are well planned out and designed. Especially that of Hayden. Well made. 5/5 World Background: The world is well built. It's based on an amazing transmigration fantasy. Overall: A well written novel. 5/5
Is the MC villain???
Right off the bat, This is an excellent read. but it does have some issues : 1. It's very slow, first readers have to focus a bit to understand what's happening for the first 30 chapters and some of the later arcs as well. 2. Its advisable to take your time while reading as even binge reading gets a bit confusing. 3. The author has to work on the pacing of the novel. its just slightly off, you should give extra breathing room to the readers. 4.The story arcs are longer by atleast 10 chapters for each arc, which takes too much out of the readers. 5. The world building is really good, though we could have an explanation a bit earlier, character design is done well. I hope this helps, it is an excellent read do not miss this novel.
This is once again another author that likes to promote his own novel but I felt that after such a long time it's necessary to write it. Simply put, this is going to be a long story. Many genres will collide with one another during the entire story, therefore, the tags about are not enough. Second thing, it's slow a slow-paced story which might be discouraging at times. The world is made to be somewhat believable but still to the point in which word fantasy is a good explanation of the story. It's quite dark at times. As shameless as I am when writing this, I won't spoiler any story but for the people that like long stories with a lot of thoughts behind most lines and things. This is a story for you, as I said, this will be a long story. Some parts will be worse than others. While reading, remember the age of the MC.
First, this story has a hundred chapters which is great for binge reading. The narratives were also clear and can be portrayed easily by the readers. The characters descriptions and dialogues were well-written. You could clearly sympathize with the mc's emotions, sufferings and adventures. Overall this book is great read and addition to my collections. Greatly recommended to those who love dark medieval fantasy. Great work author.
Really well-written story. Here the author is in no rush, just going about his business to slowly set up the characters and the fictional world they inhabit. I like how the protagonist has lost his memory so it seems like the reader is slowly but surely making sense of this new world alongside him. Some interesting powers on display in the early chapters and i am looking forward to seeing how these are incorporated into the plot in the coming installments. The protagonist is an interesting character who is mostly shrouded in mystery. Even he himself does not know who he is. The writing quality in this one is high. Prose is nice, efficient and easy to read. Excellent quality work of fiction so far.