Mt Yellow should have revealed a 3rd divination at:
He lowered his head to look at the divinatory results.
"..."
In the fan translation it was "Turn back suddenly, and discover that your destined person is there, by the waning lantern lights.”
"what the heck" -> "who the heck"
"accidentally key in" -> "accidentally keyed in"
"last for aye" -- This part doesn't make any sense to me, but I don't know how to fix it
"I recon that" -> " I reckon that"