jordiMaverick_bW
This book keeps getting better and better.My reading has been almost flawless,oI don’t have much to say about the characters except that everything about them is fine tuned.Their emotions are well expressed.Id really like it if you were to give more detail to the world around them and how it affects them.It would really help bring more emotion and picture to the book,after all nature does play a part on one’s mood.One more thing,I’d like to hear more on the dojo that Jason so proudly boasts about...😁Cant wait for the next chapter!!!
This novel is good, the writing quality is excellent and the story development retreat too, the story is complicated that made you want to read more and more. even though the unimportant character's name is a little bit weird, it's not strange because it's only title. the world background itself is detailed and the character design too.
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