I really like this story, it is actually one of my favorites, but the translation really doesn't do it justice. There are missing words, wrong words being used, sentences that simply make no sense, parts that are simply not translated properly and probably many other kinds of mistakes and the text simply doesn't flow at all. I really think this novel deserves a better translator.
What I like about this story is the plot, the setting and the characters. I especially like the characters. I think the world building is a bit lacking, but the other aspects of the story make it up for that. I find the characters as well as the events unfolding in the story to be very amusing. Unfortunately, nothing can really make it up for that horrible translation. I myself feel forced to read MTL as I can actually understand that much better than this. I apologize for ****** these possibly painful remarks, but I'm just stating the truth.
