Your Girlfriend Calls Me Daddy

Not going to lie I didn’t think this novel would be this good but it’s really good❤️

Read into the 30's so far. It's not bad. Not amazing, but not bad. This is extremely similar to My Scumbag System, and yet that novel is better imo. I just think the overall system is more thought out and entertaining, as is the MC. By a lot. I also like Four of a Kind by this author better than this one. My question is, why start a whole new novel that's basically a knockoff of the authors own book, instead of investing more time and effort into two books they already have that are pretty popular and gaining more traction every week....? That doesn't really make sense to me. My only other grievance is that this author has a tendency to space dialogue and other things out significantly. I'm talking about the actual physical spacing in the chapters. Plus the book is double spaced. I actually really enjoy the pacing of the dialogue and the way it's written most of the time, but there's times where I'm at the end of a chapter I just paid for and I realize that 'chapter' would probably barely qualify as a paragraph on an 8x10 sheet of paper. This is so minor overall that it's not affecting my actual star rating, but thought it was worth mentioning. To summarize, I think this is worth a shot to read, but in my opinion this author already has two other books that are both significantly better and more popular than this one that he should focus on before starting another project.

Alright. I've read a bit of Scumbag system before and the start here is the complete opposite. dont hate it but could've been a big rougher to push some early development. couple potential female leads introduced but since this is by chapter 5 not much to say, same with the main character and world building. based on what I remember from scumbag system the world building is usually p good and characters are fun so overall: looking forward for more. imma rate it a 4/5 for now on all boards. could go up in the future depends on how author develops the world and characters etc.

I read 130+ chapters and I have to say, the journey is not worth it. The book starts out interesting, and I think until chapters 70-80, it is actually quite good. But the fall off is incredible. First of all, 100% use of AI by the time I reach my chapter. Maybe before it was used here and there for certain descriptions to ease the author's job, and I am OK with that. But by around chapter 135, it seems the author has just given up, and he simply makes AI write all of it. Characters from one chapter to another say completely different things, and mention events opposite to what actually happened. It's really horrible. If you are reading this review, I really advise you to not waste time with it. I am actually a big fan of the author's other work, Four of a Kind, but do not be fooled. That one is overly descriptive and repetitive, but still worth the journey. This one, definitely not!

Hey! Your story is amazing, I can see it as a full-blown comic or Webtoon. I do Webtoons, comics, manga, character designs, and covers, and I’d love to work with you DM me on Discord: (Clarissadoesitall)..

I really like the story and the characters Btw author can you update your discord link please? [img=update][img=update]

Hello! Your story was a wonderful read. The way you developed the scenes and characters made every chapter feel cinematic, and it immediately sparked ideas for visual adaptation. As an artist, I enjoy working with authors to create illustrations, character designs, and comic-style projects based on their stories. I think your work has great visual potential. Feel free to contact me on Disc0rd (ava_crafts) if you're interested. Kind regards, Ava

Wow, just wow.. I can't believe I'm gonna say this, but I'll say it anyways.. this is actually good, like 'top tier novel that needs to be shared with others' kind of good- I highly recommend.

better than scumbag system imo, I sent the wrong post in your other novel lol

This novel is really good I like it a lot! I’m looking forward to more author[img=update][img=update]