In Marvel As Loki

The story itself is fine but I couldn’t stand the MC and the way he’s so vocal about being an incel. It’s really annoying when you have to read every few sentences about how much he thinks actual women are ugly and how 2D women are superior. It’s literally in every chapter, just really sad.

The fact a woman has to be at a certain level of "hot" for you to even want to interact much less save her life. Yeah a reviewer warned me about this story, but I had to check it out myself. I see the reviewer was correct, the MC is a total incel loser. Like seriously who even thinks like this? I'm not saying he should just drop everything and go save the "wohman", but like the fact that his thoughts are 'women in trouble', do I save her? 'nah she's not hot enough', kinda fuking retarded, I mean if it was just cause you don't want to bother saving people then that's fine, but if your deciding factor is there looks, then you're kinda retarded. Also Natalie Portman is hot, idk wtf your talking about.

This is a translation and not the original fanfic.

On Webnovel, everyone hates translators on Rulate, but at least they indicate the author of the work when they translate it and honestly admit that it is a translation at the moment of description.

MC is very passive and I mean he doesn’t do anything worth to improve themself even while having meta knowledge. Author knowledge is very shallow about MCU up until chapter 18 seen a lot of plot holes. Lastly the crony comedy, flirting is very annoying the repetitive writing style too.

Tried to speed read the first few chapters to avoid the loser nonsense filled with INCEL hate on anything their warped misogynistic mind can find.... That didn't work, Hard Pass!!

yhhh, it feels like a incel chinese translation guys 😬 the mc feels like he has 3 chins and 4 neck beards

Good book. The first chapter was a little rough but after that it is great. The writing quality is pretty good not perfect but better than most. Update frequency is nice it updates at least 3-4 times a week if not more.

There is some witty humor and the plot is not that bad but the MC makes this unreadable for me. He just… complains. About everything; how the MCU women aren’t pretty enough compared to comic counterparts, how he feels nothing towards humanity anymore and has random thoughts of genocide, how he wants to simply escape the universe, how he is in ”shock” because of the transmigration and that is the reason for is unstable psyche. Then there is the hatred towards ”western barbarians” and yankees from the author that bring absolutely nothing to the story. Oh, and Black Widow who was brainwashed and raised as a child soldier basicly is apparently a treasonous w***e because she did not want to play nice with the people who made her early years a living hell and made her incapable of having children. Granted it is not as bad as some chinese fanfics or novels but it is quite irksome.

What he did to Black Widow (Natasha) in chapter 42 makes no sense. This is some mental problem on the part of the author, Natasha was a killer who was turned into a weapon by a very cruel organization. She gave up that life and decided to serve an organization that tries to protect the world. So I think this part doesn't make sense, so I decided to change this part and ignore these events and everything that happens from them in the audiobook I made.

Author has very limited knowledge of the MCU and completely ruins the story with his incel writing. Refusing to save a woman cause she’s not hot enough, making multiple implications that underage women are superior, general superiority complex a couple mentions of the N word. Ts is ass and someone needs to look at the author’s PC hard drive and probably recommend him a therapist for his general Incel shi.

I tried to stick through cuz I thought the premise of the story was interesting but my God is the guy's personality and sufferable even original Loki wasn't that bad like f*** downgrade

This is genuinely this most atrociously stupid MC I have ever seen. The poster child for incels with atrocious thoughts process. The first chapter represents perfectly well the character. It doesn’t get any better.

Exaggeration! Exaggeration! I really don't see any misogyny. If this is misogyny, then all the other novels are written against men. ------------------------------ You have an interesting perspective on cinema's impositions regarding the image of 'strong independent women,' and it is somewhat true. In fact, Marvel writers are carrying out a cultural invasion and a media war against real men and women, to the extent that if you are a normal man or woman, you seem abnormal. According to Marvel writers, you have to be an opinionated, alcoholic, homosexual jerk just to be considered a complete human being. They want children to believe that if you are not a selfish, wild, alcoholic, addicted, and brainless creature, you are not a cool person at all. Shouldn't a hero at least be good-tempered and polite? No, even Thanos is more polite than Marvel's heroes. During battle, every hero was hurling insults, but Thanos fought politely—and this was despite the fact that they shamelessly attacked him many-against-one. What is the difference between Thanos, Scarlet Witch, and Dark Phoenix when both sides committed mass murder to the same extent? Yet Scarlet becomes a hero just because she is friends with the heroes, while Thanos is the villain. At least Thanos's goal in doing this was something good, but Scarlet and Jean Grey slaughtered a massive number of people just because of momentary emotions and things of that nature, and still became heroes. ------------------------------

I like the comedy and how the protagonist interacts with the other characters; their personalities feel consistent with established canon. Something I don't like is that the explanations drag on too long. I understand the author wants to explain each event as logically as possible, but it's a bit excessive. Those who complain about how the protagonist treats women have clearly never read another Marvel or DC story on this platform. They all feature a protagonist who wants to be a god, or is a god, and who sees women as pieces of meat to be captured. What are they complaining about?

Writing Quality- Not the best translation I've seen but its readable Stability of Updates-Give it a three but I dropped the story pretty quickly Story Development- not much to say here I'm 42 chapters in and not much has happened. Slow going, maybe it picks up later who knows. Character Design- Racist, ultranationalist Russian, and he never, never stops complaining about everything. Oh and he is erratic and insane World Background- I'm not sure if this is an AU or if this guy has no understanding of the Marvel universe. To sum things up this is trash but not the worst trash on this site.

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nice story, just skip all the complaining and you'll enjoy it.

The story is fine, but the MC is so freaking unlikeable. He ruins it all.

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