High School DxD: Reincarnation Perks

After about 22 chapters author stops caring about keeping character names correct. Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count Word count

I will not lie. The story started off pretty good. And then it took a very sharp nose knive in quality and the main character becomes a background character and its all about issei like at that point Just read the normal dxd story Because this is absolute dog shit like, this is supposed to be a fan fiction, not "Oh, I'm just gonna rewrite the original story we're hardly anything changes from the original." like i've read like forty or however many chapters it says I read and it just keeps getting worse.

Good work so far is what i would say if you actually focused on your mc but sorry to say but if i wanted to see what happened in original i would watch the anime... i was here for mc not Issei if he was the mc then ok but this completely killed the mood to continue even if its well enough written sorry.

at some point author just stops caring about translating properly (likely using Ai or Google translate) and doesnt proof read chapters. genders getting mixed up, sentences not making sense due to name mixup or adjective errors. all minor errors but honestly seeing whole chapters like this is well, annoying. I want to spend my time reading not actively rearranging words/paragraphs in my head to have it make sense. outside of that, it's cool to see mc have Nikki kurogane's abilities from chivalry of a failed knight.

it's totally a bad story worst of its kind just stop writing 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

Try proof reading your shit, after ch 22 dont bother reading it anymore

A story that was ruined despite its potential; it's unclear which character is speaking; while reading, we're left wondering if we're accidentally reading a different story; and after a certain point, we no longer see the protagonist in the narrative.

It's good, worth reading, I don't understand why this has no reviews and very less views

man after 20's mc becomes a background character .... it's all about issei😑

Does anyone know the raw name of the book?

it was good but after ch22 it went down the hole it state right now was unsalvageable right now it a shame tho it got a good potential at first

Name confusion, and the story after the beginning of the plot revolves around Iссей, while the author has forgotten about the hero of this fic.

Around chapter 20ish the quality takes a nosedive and never recovers. Gave me a headache trying to read. Pure slop. Not worth anyone's time..................................

Its pretty good but there is some problems with the names cause some mistranslate but othe than that its pretty good.

Me gusta mucho; es auténtico y te engancha para seguir leyendo. La trama me parece que está bien elaborada. Espero que sigas escribiendo este fanfic y, con muchas ansias