Marvel/HP: A Third Path to the Future

You better do this, Justice. This was my first.EVER. I'm watching you.

I like the story but the MC seems forced. he has to prank people. like it's a system forcing and not like some natural part of who he is. and he has to describe women so sexually. its always unneeded and is really creepy. I can only assume the author is starving for p*ssy and human contact. Also hes distorted so many characters to push this plot that it's really watered down some of them.

Honest review.Read at least the first three chapters to judge it. Hey guys, I've found another hidden gem in the world of web novels. Why does this novel have lowlights and why were they hidden... Thanks to the author for writing this fanfic and please don't drop it... I appreciate it. [img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it][img=Feeling it]

guys the story is good but for my fellow cultured folks this has harem but this has that disgusting polyester or something relationship, and has Yuri in it so be caution but if you can stomach it like me then the story is perfect.

I loved this fanfic and was all for it it had my all favorites, kingdom building, Harry Potter in marvel, technology advancement but it just had to involve that disgusting polyester something in relationships like Yuri sh*t, at the middle don't even know if they love harry or not.

Your story has such cinematic energy that I could see every scene unfolding like panels of a comic. The emotions and atmosphere are incredible. Have you ever thought of adapting it visually?

Una buena historia hasta el momento, con ideas interesantes pese al cliché de Marvel x HP, con una seleccion de waifus exquisita y algunas visiones del futuro interesantes. Estoy deseando ver a donde lleva.