DC: Rise Of The Kryptonian Tyrant

Mc was captured as soon as he landed. What made this an enjoyable read for me so far was the way he manipulated everyone to escape. I also hope Jenny survives, even though I feel like it will be detrimental to bardi, but I hope he won't be inhumane enough to kill her. Anyways, I look forward to reading this.

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This follows the story of an evil and cunning MC. He's also pretty smart too though, I won't say THAT smart because he makes some pretty basic mistakes later on. But regardless, I think it's a good story, so give it a try. As always, if you notice any mistakes, let me know in the comments, and I'll fix them. Have a nice read.

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all the starting chapter really was like the second coming of fang yuan and hope the mc actually stays true to the villain tag and the slight affection towards jenny was bit off putting considering she would also regard him as a test subject if it were not for his manipulation even if it werent for that he is also said to have manipulated and betrayed countless people in krypton well we'll see how it goes but the author is a pretty good writer and the story has a lot of potential

All though in the beginning the concept of the story seemed like nothing new the writing and the characters personality got me hooked it has the potential to be one of the better dc fan fics on this app

Mother fucker, write your own novel already. This shit was phenomenal, i say. You don't need to copy off someone else work. And grammar was top notch as well.

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So far so good. But, little bit slow paced for my taste.