I liked the story so far, but the dialogues seemed a little off. The pacing also feels a bit slow, but I think it’s just my anxiety to find out what Sujin’s Zanpakuto will be. What’s the name of the Zanpakuto? What are its powers? Since the MC’s name is Sujin, maybe it’s something related to water? For me, Zanpakuto are one of the best things in Bleach fanfics, I hope the author answers my questions in the upcoming chapters. Depending on the answers, I might change my rating to 5 stars.