Arcane Anew

Jinx’s for the FMC is the only way to go best wife

I can't find myself to feel anything for this story at this point other than annoyance tbh. You had a solid start, then you got too enthusiastic about punishing the kids. Despite all the changes, you had to keep things close to canon with the main events e.g. having benzo die, vandar die, jinx causes an explosion again, vi not learning anything despite having caused problems multiple times. If youre gonna add another character to change things have canon characters develop alongside them. Your MC is always confused or in pain, despite 50+ chapters he’s still the same as he was in chapter 10, both character and ability wise. Whenever important events happen everyone is reset to default settings as if none of the original events happened.

It’s too early to give a proper review, but I’m obsessed with Arcane, so I’m still going to give it a decent score. The grammar is fine not perfect, but good enough. The chapters feel a bit short; I’m used to 3k words per chapter, and these seem shorter than that. Still, good job, author—you’re doing a semi-decent job! Hope you dont make the main character overpowerd or rush romance. its always the best to take it slow.

This Arcane fic is awesome from what we can see in the first few chapters it is a reincarnation story where mc has magic which may sound simple at first but those who know runeterra know how much potential this seemingly simple idea has. I really hope this continues and I highly recommend this to people who see this review.

Chapters are super short and most of it is the MC whining or confused. Even powder seems more mature than this MC. Can you fix whatever prompt you gave to the AI?

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A solid read so far. The author gives the characters their due, keeping the personalities convincingly realistic and faithful to the original. Interactions between characters feel fluid and natural, but the writer’s inexperience writing dialogue shines through during a few conversations. Other than that I can’t fault this work in any way. Great job so far, and keep it up 👍

my man, there's very few Arcane Stories over here, even less as good as this one, so, take this five stars, and please... continue this to the end, and all my power stones are yours. :)

5 page chapters, you might as well not write anything

Me a gustado mucho el desarrollo quw se a llevado en el personaje principal junto a la interacciones de los personajes con este y por supuesto la historia que es entretenida y intrigante, otra cosa que agrada es que el protagonista no es super poderoso inmediatamente y se va desarrollando de manera inteligente su poder. Otra cosa es el hecho de saber cosas de la trama pero aun si no poder solucionar todo de inmediato pero que poco a poco se muestre una idea de solución es muy agradable.

The story is good but the mc is too much of a fan boy for me

reading your fanfiction brings me so much comfort, and its something i truly look forward to after a long day at work. theres something about your writing that helps me unwind and escape yk. keep it up brother.

Arcane has potential. Although the chapters are short, the story is captivating. Great job, author! Just don't make the main character too overpowered and develop the relationships slowly

I’ve been loving the arcane show I hope you don’t change nothing major because I do like the characters arcs that the characters go through p.s if if goin do a romance just do the poly with him, vi, and Cati don’t touch timebomb

i hope you can finish this book,i like the idea.................................................................................................................

Pretty epic dawg.hjjdjejjdjenememskksksksksmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmsmmsmsmsmsmsmsmsms

Author's got me by the balls. The writing has amazing quality with thought out development and realistic characters and growth. Am eagerly awaiting each new chapter.

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Just amazing overall I love the amazing come up the author is doing a great job

Really like that somebody making a story about Arcane more than 10 chapters. Keep up thiis work man.