Love the story so far!! You know it's good when you get anxious cuz you're already halfway through the current chapter count [img=recommend]
The characters are great, the MC is smart, cunning, ruthless when needed and very likeable. The rest of the characters feel real and full of depth. The background and story progression so far has been fantastic and I can't wait for more.
The grammar at times isn't perfect, mixing the he's and she's. But that happens only a single-digit number of times and does't affect the flow of the story, those with a high enough IQ could read through this with no effort. I would also love for some more development between the MC and the rest of the characters, maybe even a FL, but that's all secondary and a personal preference, as the story is already decent as is.
