Messy.No order.Everything is all over the place.Litteraly it's all over the place.Imagine have to work a kitchen by urself in a restaurant and ur preparing different orders at the same time.The Mc is running from world to world speed running 🏃 just to achieve minimal success in every world.Its all a mess.Everythings going by fast and it seems that the Mc isn't even part of the Naruto world he lives and showers in a freaking RV lmao.Its all just messy.
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Very good story, please continue. I want to see where the story will go.
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This is good story imo, it has some of his faults like the MC being a bit too "arrogant" and "Intelligent" over fictional characters, but I would say that it's not a big factor to make this story unreadable
Started reading thus with apprehension but truly loved it. Good hope to see more chapters asap
that sounds interesting
Good 😁👍 . . . .
