This story is really good! If you're looking to pass the time and enjoy something that keeps you hooked, it's a great pick. Of course, there are some points I'd tweak, like the repetitive emphasis on racial inequality. I get that it’s a real issue in the world (and a big one, unfortunately), but the story brings it up a bit too much, which kind of breaks the flow of the reading. That aside, and a few other small details, it's really good! You won't regret it.