The grammar is horrible, the relationship between the characters and the protagonist is too rushed, that is, they literally talk to each other as if they have known each other for a long time but they haven't even been there for 3 days, it's absurd.
a genshin impact fanfic that's not mtl!?
this story is great so keep up the amazing work 💯💯
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Fun fanfic enjoyed it keep it up and improve your Grammer please
