I like the story.
The writing quality can improve but everything is comprensibile and English must be a secondary or third language so it's comprehensible.
The story is interesting, i would like to see the mc go on his own path and do something unique.
the mc is cool, but i would like to know about him more, likes dislikes, defects, good qualities ecc.
The world background is good since this is a fanfic.
4.4 Stars
It would be better if the Author made a more comprensible power system, because i know that we all read countless novels, so we don't really have time to memorize every stat.
Thanks for the story and don't drop or we are gonna jump you in jjk style ππΏπ