Comments of chapter undefined of Twilight: Rebirth

In my mind he would cure Rosalie's vampire defects, travel to Los Angeles to open a workshop and already have the hook for fast and furious 😂😂

thanks for the chapter i love this novel I was a bit iffy maybe it was how I Read it but it seemed like you had the mc and Rose mate bonded but were going to make them be with different people I don't like heart break stuff or depressing stuff but I'm really liking this thanks

Give him the mane, pretty please

Geralmente eu faço isso, deixo meus problemas para meu eu futuro, e sempre fico puto com meu eu do passado kkkkkkkk

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the chapter

Can I please have some more?

Thanks for the chapter! Rosalie is very gentle, I wonder whether it's her pwrsonality due to loneliness for almost a century or if it's just her attitude with Gabriel. It'd be great to see her act a bit like canon Rose in front of Gabriel. It would help them delve into some deeper issues - her past and her vampirism. I empathize with Rose, but I feel like making her wish for aging and having a (mortal) family a reality would be a bit too far-fetched. for MC. He has an immortal's power set after all. Opening their own ahop would be wholesome though. Destroying Victoria and her coven early on would pretty much destroy the plot of New Moon and Eclipse unless you can come up with something else, or Victoria manages to escape (a very inexperienced) Gabriel. A huge flaw in the saga is that we don't get to see much of what happens between Bella and Edward between prom until her birthday. They had months to find a good dynamic, but somehow they end up damaged af. If Gabriel is there, he'll probably help that relationship not turn into a disaster. It always baffled me how the entire family thought whatever they had was okay. Merry cultivation, fellow Daoist.

Umu their romance is cute, cant wait for more

Thanks for the chapter and keep up the good work I'm looking forward to the next one

TFTC

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Thx for the chapter

nice. kiking your story so far

Tftc