Honestly, the highest regards I can give this story is the fact that it REALLY doesn’t seem like a CN MTL. It doesn’t have the insufferable wuxiafication tendencies (ordering hits on a person for walking near your lawn), nor does it have the typical dogwater MTL editing (suddenly the MC’s name is Shang Long or something despite the fact that they were named Adam two sentences ago).
The story development so far is pretty typical I’d say, but it’s still enjoyable for what it is.
I only have surface-level knowledge of both FATE and Yu-Gi-Oh, but so far it’s pretty accurate, besides the fact that characters with English names (i.e. Joey and Tea, but not Mai for whatever reason) have Japanese names instead. Those might just be their actual names though.
I doubt I would have ever read this if I wasn’t hopelessly scrounging for good yuri fanfics, but I was pleasantly surprised.
⑨/10