Stories really good but a bit disappointing with character interactions, Mc basically had his life stripped away by a random bitch, who wants him to act like a knight and protect her? I think the story would feel lil less frustrating if he just straight up snapped at her first cause anyone in his situation would have called her out (maybe still do what they have too but at least say it for what it is….he’s got the balls to be disrespectful and funny guy but not the balls to call her out? Stories like these are becoming too cliche. If he doesn’t get with her which he clearly will, it’d honestly make this story a million times better. Not even gonna say anything about ol’ sneaky wolf girl. Best of luck to the author.
