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The MC's internal thoughts were written beautifully. I also like T and I can sense his struggle in the robotic way he is. One thing I would comment would be how the dialogue was written. When it was still the same person speaking, I got a little confused when the dialogue was separated. I thought it was another character speaking until I read the overall context of the dialogue before figuring out it was actually still the same person. It is a minor problem and didn't affect the story at all. Overall the story is awesome and intriguing. Keep up the good work!
A good sci-fi story that started with a painful feeling of loss., This story has a nice emotional buildup. Action scenes are also nicely written. Keep on writing and updating this story because it has an interesting plot., Best of luck in writing! :) By the way, this is my second time giving a review., :)
Review After Reading Chapter 5 Writing in first person PoV with the narrator using romanticism is an unusual way to make a SciFi genre. But the author made great use of the style to color the exposition of the character, understanding the feelings within. It helps that the author has excellent grammar skills which improve its readability. Update stability seems to be okay. Story Development, while a little slow paced for a SciFi, it had a noir vibe to it instead of action. Taking time to introduce the MC's mental state was necessary, but could use a bit the main plot's progression, little by little every chapter. Character design was as intended by the author. Good work. World background is logical. Whether it's a futuristic urban world with state of the art technology, it is always nice to see when the writer uses a logical science behind it, especially when it comes to time travel. Good work!
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This is a great book. The perspective and phrasing being employed is just phenomenal. Clearly, the author has honed that voice for quite some time. Great work! That alone merits being added to the library. The story is incredibly relatable, with themes centered around loss and regret. Writing about a repeated heartbreak is tough. Definitely read this novel.
I'm very enjoying reading this story. It's just sooooo beautiful! The concept is very interesting. I'm amazed with lots of knew knowledge I get from this but you can explain all of them in a easy and beautiful way. The poetic style writing you use are so amazing and it flow perfectly inside my heart! Great job! Love this story and keep writing! π₯°π₯°π₯°πππ
This is nice! It's so well written that it makes me wonder how much effort did the author have to put into thisπ The deep love. That's what touched me. I'm always in when it comes to a novel portraying deep loveπ I'm super bad at science, that's why some part made me confusedπ Overall, this is a good read! Great job, author!!π€