the novel is perfect, but the only problem here is the grammar problem, also, the author should be careful between the normal discussions and the characters' thoughts (especially in the last chapters), because it makes reading the last chapters a a little confusing, I don't know if the author uses AI to help him or if he simply decided to change his writing but I recommend writing like in the first chapters because it's much better. in short, regarding the novel I cannot give a detailed review since the novel is only at the beginning, but apart from some problems with grammar and dialogue, the novel is on the right track. (PS: I hope the author doesn't sabotage the novel with the harem 😟)
