I feel like these pass few chapters could've been a single chapter. But the chapters feel shorter and are just saying the same information from multiple points of view and stuff. It's stalling for content.
You need to put more in the chapter you basicly didn’t put anything substantial here kinda sad because this is I copy of a already existing fanfic with minor fixes and your trying to milk as much as you can get.
Since I've been reading a lot of HP fics I was about to comment that Dumbeldore behavior was exaggerated but then remembered he forced the link with fawkes and that this was how you portraired him in this fic
