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Comments of chapter undefined of Naruto: Desperate Survival

DoomBot35
DoomBot35Lv4DoomBot35

This is great. Keep it up

Devilkin
DevilkinLv13Devilkin

All the capitalization makes this harder for me to read. It makes sense for some words to be capitalized but whole paragraphs are. If you capitalise everything the emphasis is removed. Moreover, it's not clear what the capitalization is meant to reference, is it shouting if so these ninjas are shouting their location to everyone around. You could maybe use punctuation (!) instead. If you're married to it then whatever, but I don't like it.

aboshwkey
aboshwkeyLv5aboshwkey

and btw don't listen to any criticism you are doing just fine with the story so far keep doing the awesome work . take your time dont be hasty with the story keep going on ur own pace

nicewolf007
nicewolf007Lv4nicewolf007

why is the MC is still talking to these npc just blow everything up and run he is strong enough to survive on his own

Dammo_Ndri
Dammo_NdriLv1Dammo_Ndri

toujours aussi bon on se regale avec tous ces chapitres

red550
red550Lv4red550

Thank you for the chapter

aboshwkey
aboshwkeyLv5aboshwkey

keep going man its awesome

N_mq
N_mqLv2N_mq

Brother is Sun Tsu