Well, I don't really write reviews that much but here is my take. The story is solid. Worldbuilding is gradual and not just a huge dump, and MC isn't exactly a "arrogant young master ready to defile every jade beauty underneath the vast sky."
Although, one thing that--kind of--ticked me off was the gradual use of Ai in later chapters. I didn't really bother checking but that is what my gut told me, since I have also used chatGPT for various purposes.
But eh, other than that, if you can ignore the obvious flaws in the narrative and a few oversights, it's a pretty fun read. + grammar and writing style is also pretty decent.
Well decent would be an insult, it's actually good. Hmmm...that's it, I suppose. See ya in some other book.
P.S I am writing this review after getting caught up with the free chaps. For some reason my fast passes are not working on PC, so will read more and maybe edit my review later on when I have my phone on me. Cheers.