Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars: Senator

your doing fine not unreadable at all. I'm enjoying the story. keep up the great work.

Don’t get down from all the hate. Keep it up. The story is really good and I would love to see more of it!

Persona who says "bat gramar" never write anything and only let envy take control

i think this is a great fanfic novel, i don't know why that person say that you have bad grammar but for me it's excellent from the way you make the stories from the starting point until now it makes me very curious to what will the next chapter will be like. Thank you for making this fanfic i hope you can make more great starwars fanfic in the future.

Don’t You DARE drop this Author!!! SHOW ME THE HATER!!!

Thanks for the chapter

Thanks for the great chapter! Have my power stone!

thanks for the chapter and keep up the awesome work.

Good story this story will have some drama or harem scenes

The grammar in this fiction is actually much better than most fiction in webnovel...the guy saying about bad grammar is very dumb...

I think it's going pretty well I am actually looking forward to seeing which direction you want to go with this when the empire comes in.

Just started reading this and I see some errors every once in a while but if one uses like 2 brains cells they would understand what you are trying to write. I only complain about grammer on like those translated novels as those are hard to understand even when using 2 brain cells. Really enjoying the story so far and have no clue what thise reviews are talking about.

Dang that sucks. Keyboard warrior for sure. Just want to say the story is great so far. The spelling and grammar have slight mistakes but nothing terrible. Keep up the good work and thanks for sharing your story.

Thank you for the amazing chapters. Although late, I want to say is, the story is very good. I recommend Author learning about, perspectives of narration. As current story is from MC perspective. To make it more engaging, I suggest an experiment, by changing the narrations and perspectives in story. And try to take some time off the story and let the imagination set. I may help you in long run by occasionally taking breaks. Thanks for your hard work.

Don't worry about these du*bass. Just make your story and don't worry about the critic. Only listen ton the constructive one.

Danke für das Kapitel bitte weiter so

this is a great chapter and author ignore the haters

it really is an excellent story one of the best and most interesting I've read in a while