5 Chapters in, the size of all the chapters are pretty good, the history... until now is great and I hope it will keep improving, more depth, complexity, everything, the grammar is near perfect too, something quite rare 5/5 100% recommend it.
I like this I haven’t read any decent diamond authority focused fics and ones that focus on kingdom building too I hope this one goes far.
I liked this, but I have a question, can the MC transform the Infinity Stones into gems or absorb their powers? After all, they are also a type of jewelry
Essa história está indo muito bem, espero que o autor continue até terminar! Vamos lá querido autor, que você esteja em plena saúde e sem impedimentos pra essa empreitada digna, sua história fez o meu dia e de muitos outros!!! Amo sua história intrigante com a Autoridade Diamante na Marvel, meu sonho foi realizado só por ler essa maravilha, te amo de coração!!! 🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Very interesting concept and I already like the first 3 chapters, no issues with either grammar or chapter length. Overall very enjoyable to read, hopefully it stays this quality in the future. Keep up the good work Author!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………
Great.
The story is interesting but I don't like the writing style. No tengo nada mas que escribir. .........................................................
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Truly, this is such a beautiful hidden gem~! Seriously, I didn’t go into this thinking I’d get so caught up with the world the author is actively building, with its layers of complexity and depth and just.. ugh! It’s so good! The portrayal of the diamonds, how they respond and in turn are affected by their own decisions… We’re literally seeing how the society of the gems is being built and, while not heavily intertwined with the Marvel world yet, I’m soo excited to see how it all plays out!! I can’t imagine the work that goes in to build each chapter and I’m really looking forward to how this beautiful story plays out.
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This is definitely what I'm looking for
I just love this it's so interesting. Please continue this story
Steven Universe Fics that haven’t been dropped are rare, good ones even more so This is a good one it’s not pure Steven Universe… in reality it’s a Marvel fic, but it has the entirety of the Diamond Authority and more and I’m lovin it
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Awesome.
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okay this story is good and i love the fact that the personnality of white diamond is the dominant , but now she is better leader and person . its good but just imagine this story in warhammer 40k