Comments of chapter undefined of Star Wars The Old Republic: For The Empire (SWTOR)
Star Wars The Old Republic: For The Empire (SWTOR)
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Some other things: -For armor you could give him all the gadgets that Mandalorians use as well as using beskar. -For the lightsaber you could have him create one like Cal Kestis's so he can deceive others by changing the type of lightsaber or lightsabers. -I hope you learn all forms of combat to the fullest. -Will you insert images? -He's human right?
I always wondered about images. Is that something people really like? I might consider it but that seems like something I'd do if I had enough money saved up for an artist I can hire. Or I could take screenshots from the game myself. Either way, it's not something I planned on but not something I'm against either. -The MC is human with very strong sith roots. I haven't detailed his appearance much but it'll show up sooner or later. Possibly via a P.O.V switch. While I do consider myself a descriptive writer, it never flows right when I randomly drop a description of a person while writing from things from their perspective. Maybe it's just me but I almost never wonder what I look like when I'm going about my day so it seems unnatural. Anyways, hope you enjoyed the chapter. Your other questions will be answered as things progress I think.
Thanks for the chapter. Here are some ideas for the story and I know you won't like some ideas but you also have to think that he is a sith: -Let's start with the harem (since I like it), being a sith he should follow all his desires, you could explain it with the fact that there are probably millions or more cultures in the galaxy and a good part of these probably have polygamy , he doesn't necessarily have to love the women of the harem after all he is a sith and if he is interested in someone or benefits him or is useful he should just take her, for the reason that he either dominates them with some power of the force or makes them come like Stockholm syndrome either takes thanks you have benefits that it gives them or they are S*** and etc... -By having him max out both the Sith Inquisitor and Sith Warrior paths and specializations he will become a beast and practically the strongest. -You could have him trained with all the training programs that the Sith Empire has such as special forces, intelligence, spy, technician, engineer, doctor, sith alchemy, sith magic etc... -You could still make him follow part of Darth Nox's path. -With the power of the force "the art of the little" he could modify his body to obtain superhuman characteristics and much longer longevity. -You could have him learn how to hide from Jedi like Sidious and maybe have him infiltrate them. -Instead of just having him become the emperor's wrath, you could also have him join the dark council as the head of a sphere. -If you intend to continue the story after Swtor you could have him create for example a cryogenic chamber and have him wake up in other periods of the timeline, for example during the new sith wars, during wars, during the high republic, during the films etc.. . and in the meantime let him build empires, churches based on him, organizations etc... -Is his father Darth Marr?