Yea bro ngl from reading this it seems a lot like a translation that needs editing and while there ain't the usual issues with most translations its weird when they be using new terms like “east china sea” instead of just t east blue and when u be calling people by devil fruit names 💀 I wont say the story is bad cuz its not but it needs a lot of work with grammar and terms maybe if u got a beta reader or some sort of editeor to fix up these mistakes then I would give it a 4-5 star for being alright. I wish u luck in doing this and hope you can improve
