Author here shamelessly reviewing his own work I'm a beginner so feel free to give constructive criticism. Also, I'll take suggestions especially which and how many characters should die. I have to admit my intrusive thoughts won on the outline.
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cliched shit. even novice authors know this and try to avoid this shit. It's like you're a person who read a novel for the first time in your life and it was Reverend Insanity and you started writing dropping your shit
