The beginning of the story nicely sets up the premise of a devoted surgeon's rebirth in a fantastical world, and the inclusion of a unique gift adds an intriguing twist to the plot. However, there are a few areas that could use improvement. The writing could benefit from more descriptive language and stronger characterization to help readers connect with the main character. Additionally, the pacing feels a bit rushed, and more time could be spent delving into the intricacies of this new world. Overall, with some attention to details and further development, this story has potential for a strong premise.
Your story has a captivating premise that immediately draws readers in and leaves them curious to know more about the adventures of Han in this new world. The concept of a surgeon turned beggar with a supernatural gift is unique and refreshing. The world-building is intriguing, and I can sense potential for rich and complex worldbuilding to come. With its exciting premise, relatable main character, and engaging plot, I'm eager to see where this story goes. Keep up the excellent work!