This is a really good Harry Potter story. My only gripe is that the updates aren’t frequent enough to justify the admitedly short chapters that this book has. Causing me to reas the chapters most quickly whick makes it hard at times to remember past events that’ve happened in the story. There isn’t enough depth in each chapter as they usually centre around a single event, sometimes taking two chapters to do so, making the story seem shallow despite its very good writing because of this.
