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Comments of chapter undefined of Two times rejected Luna, the desire of all Alphas

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BenJanetta_Hampton
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Alpha Denzel should inform his mate of the dangers just as he has his sister. Knowing there are people who aren't to be trusted in his pack endangers her life more because she's clueless. I really enjoy this book. Do you have any more novels in print?

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dtramsey610
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His way of doing things is how Alphas do it. That not the problem. The problem is her life & Alessias life is in danger, and Alpha Denzel should just tell them So they're not caught unaware. He knows there are spies in the pack, so come on now. He should tell the ladies.

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karen_iember
karen_iemberLv2karen_iember

I like his dua identity, but i think he's making things more complicated coz Valerie will feel lied to and used and be more upset

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Kerri_Ready
Kerri_ReadyLv11Kerri_Ready

He is only trying to protect the woman he has falling in love with. I think he needs to be more honest with her

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Mary_Segilola
Mary_SegilolaLv3Mary_Segilola

Alpha Danzel ways of doing things is quite different and logical . quodos to the Alpha Danzel . l love his ways .

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esther_ogunade
esther_ogunadeLv3esther_ogunade

he should let her know what's going on ,she's not a weak person even though she has lost her wolf

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Siti_Aizza_Sarmani
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He is too arrogant as Alpha Denzel .And what is this story about Alpha Denzel faking another identity to win Valerie's heart? Any woman would feel cheated and upset upon discovering the truth. I prefer the Alpha winning Vallerie's heart with his own identity .

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reednuvella
reednuvellaLv3reednuvella

What a great story, it’s unique and interesting

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sagittarius9212
sagittarius9212Lv15sagittarius9212

I wish he'd just tell Val the truth. I also wish Val's wolf wasn't gone, can the moon goodess have pity on her despite what she told Denzel?

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DaoistHt6aal
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Alphas Denzel should let Vallerie know the situation so that both of them could pretend to be enemies until all is settled.

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Gloria_Regular
Gloria_RegularLv12Gloria_Regular

he should tell her the truth

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Amber_Erickson_4763
Amber_Erickson_4763Lv12Amber_Erickson_4763

I like the book. I also hope she finds out zhe loves him for who he is.

Vivaci0us
Vivaci0usLv12Vivaci0us

In protecting a loved one it’s fifty-fifty. They have a right to know what’s happening. Even if you’re not going to spill every, they should at least have some sort of info.

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DaoistYK6wvX
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and I agree he should just tell them their lives are in danger. he's way to smart an Alfa not to

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DaoistYK6wvX
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I just think he's prolonged the truth easy way to long into the story. .. something at least a loving touch, words or kiss to keep her more firmly planted

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Melissa_C_2352
Melissa_C_2352Lv11Melissa_C_2352

I don't agree with the way he is treating the ladies but understand that they are in danger he should be honest with them. I am enjoying the book

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Velveta
VelvetaLv15Velveta

I agree with the comments that he should tell them both! They are two of the most important women in his life, yet in his way of protecting them, he's making it harder on each of them. I also agree that her wolf shouldn't have died. She could have gone into "hibernation," so to speak, and come out after Denzel has proven himself.

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Mamalikestoread
MamalikestoreadLv13Mamalikestoread

I am so on edge and wish he didn't go in a disguise as I think she is going to be more hurt thinking he has duped her! Saying that I am loving the book 😊

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Theresa_Snyder_4491
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no

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Cheryl_Fallin
Cheryl_FallinLv11Cheryl_Fallin

love this