Lucifer_7771
anther thing i didnt like was how gwen acted like a chinese girl all super shy and sweet, thats simply not gwen tennyson, sure she can blush and feel embarased but she is not so stupidly submissive like chinese people want. As long as you change all these things that doesnt make sense and rely more on the Canon Ben 10 universe than the fanfic then i wouldnt care to read. I just hope you do more than simply change names and directly change everything that is chineseor doesnt make sense
i have seen this fanfic too, only reason i havent read it its because it was too chinese and not loyal to the canon, for example a lot of people dismising the debut of aliens that was even recorded disdaining the news like if they were chinese people, when in canon people were shocked but believed the news because they were obvious proofs and also because in 2005 they were no photoshoped stuff so people obviuosly assumed it was real