Translation is okay, also you posted ch 1 twice. I've read this before, and I must say this is one of the more realistic start among CN Hollywood stories, it's not just write this and baam Millionaire! But my main complaint is there's too much water (too verbose for word count). If you're looking for a HW story where the MC chose films that would be critically acclaimed instead of quick cash grab like Blair Witch, then this is for you.